not teaching,
still THINKING …
Lively language. The way we put words together makes a difference in how our message is received. One way to achieve lively language is to choose strong verbs. Substitute a strong verb for a weak one. Choose verbs that show action. Avoid “there is” and “there are.”
Here are some simple tips:
- Consult a thesaurus. Use every opportunity to make a good verb better and a strong verb stronger. Choose precisely the right word. Rewrite and rethink.
- Check definitions. Be sure words convey their intended meanings. A quick look at a dictionary can uncover a better word for the message. Pay attention to nuance. Visualize the action.
- Keep a list. Any time you choose a strong verb to replace a weak one, jot down the original word and its substitute. Keep adding to the list. This is a practical approach because it will help you to make quick decisions in the future.
Make it a priority to achieve lively language. Your message depends on it.
(These two profs are no longer teaching at Syracuse University’s Newhouse School, but we are still thinking.)